For them to see you shine,
You’re going to have to stay far away,
Cause you’re just like the sun.
When you’re too close,
Your light blinds them.
And when you’re too far away,
They will seek you.
So let them seek you.
-The Travellothoner
Wonderful 🌺
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Thank you 🙂
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Just do not get too far away 🙂 Lovely poem, I love its simplicity 🙂
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Thank you so much ☺️
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Of course, you know that you are really special when you stand next to the sun and they can only see you 🙂 Just a thought for you 🙂
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Neat! 🙂
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Thank you 😃
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A very interesting message, this one spoke to me.
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I really love it. Simple, pure, perfectly chiseled – even for my very french ears
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Thank you so much 🙂
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It’s sincere. I love your way of writing and telling the world.
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Wow! 🖤👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼🙌🏼🙌🏼🙌🏼
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Beautiful poem. Loved it ♥♥♥
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Thank you 🙂
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My pleasure
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Beautiful! I love the imagery of the sun, the metaphor, and the message. Great poem 🌼
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Beautiful poem, simplicity at its best
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The paradox of bright light perhaps.. 😀
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A very wise and poetic thought
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Lovely poem!! ❤
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Great poem!
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Great words. 👌
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Thank you 🙂
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