I didn’t fall in love with you,
I walked right into it with my eyes wide open.
Choosing to take every step along the way,
And having faith in what fate had in store for me.
I spend my days waiting for you,
Searching for your face through the crowds.
And my heart skipped a beat the moment we talked,
For my soul your little gaze had caught.
But I also believe we are fated to do things we choose anyway,
And I know I’d choose you in a hundred different lifetimes,
Across worlds and times, every second of the day.
-The Travellothoner
Very Nice and well written. Beautiful.
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Sweet!
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Love this!
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Youβre welcome π
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Beautiful. That was how I felt in love!
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LOVELY…
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Beautiful piece!
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So lovely π·
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I love it …very romantic…uber sweet!
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Thank you so much π
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Nice! Fated soulmates all the way
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This is soo beautiful! Oh my heart!! **sigh**
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wonderful.
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Let us know if she has already said yes. π she’d be very lucky to be around a person who writes poems on her.. π
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Sadly, she hasnβt so far.
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Opssss…. The longer the wait.. The sweeter the taste.. ππ
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Haha.. Hopefully it comes to that!
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Beautiful π
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Very romantic π
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Beautiful!
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Sweetness personified. Love it!
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Think about God’s invisible hands of fate that bring each of us to a place where we choose or don’t choose.
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The chosen one must be a force of nature to be a recipient of such fierce emotion. Beautiful
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Sweet and lovely!
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very cute π
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I like that
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Great poem!
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Okay, I can tell that you are young. That is great. I, on the other hand am old and I want to give you something to consider about your writing. Just consider removing the words βand, but and forβ as first words in any line. Think of those words as taking a breath you donβt need tell the reader to pause or breathe they will do it instinctively and I promise it will not change the meaning of your poem. You are on the right track. How many words do you write each day, I try for 1,000. But Iβm retired and have lots of time. Set goals. You are full up with good thoughts and ideas. – Judi
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Hey, thank you so much. I shall definitely consider all that youβve said, and try to work on it.
I donβt try to write too much on a daily basis because I have studies and work that consume my entire day. I keep scribbling things whenever I get time, or just write on the notes in my phone.
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Tears, speechless…
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Very good.
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This is beautiful!
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Beautifully written. Congrats!
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uuuh i like your blog! an your poems π
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Beautiful poem
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