Just a winter morning
Waking me up wrongly at three or four,
My mind the only brightened thing
In this darkened house.
I wake up from my bed
Turning to my spot at the window,
Leering outside on the empty street
Pondering on the kind of day it has been.
Recollecting all the faces that were seen today,
Remembering all the conversations that were had.
Rethinking all the words that were said today,
Visualizing all the pages that were read.
Itβs all a big blur
Like a day without specs.
Except that 25 minute conversation with her,
That I remember so distinctly.
It was a normal conversation,
Nothing other than the usual.
Although it was a special individual,
That made it all so real.
And suddenly my thoughts
That were once slow went into overdrive.
And what was once a broken sleep
Turned into a struggle.
While the time stood still
And the hours went by.
As the darkness turned to light
And it all faded away.
-The Travellothoner
Great post π
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Thank you so much!
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nice! love how the rhythm of this poem matches this idea your thoughts being in “overdrive”, flows quite nicely
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Thank you so much ππ
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There’s some great lines here. I like your style π
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Thank you π
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Now im really awake…:)
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Iβll take that as a compliment? π
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So was it a connection for real or in a dream…? I liked your description of a day without specs…a day in blur…
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It was a connection to reality, the entire thing. And thank you for the kind words π
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I really like this poem. It has action as well as feeling, and it’s also reflective of past actions and feelings. Almost like being invited into someone’s journal entry yet much more. Thank You! Kristen Barney
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Hey, thank you so much for those lovely words Kristen ππ
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You are most welcome, traveler. Kristen
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beautifully written
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Thank you π
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Beautiful and Inspiring for me.
I once felt the same but there was no Cinderella ending. I pray that those feelings will one day reappear-with the right person before my hair grays.
I hope it works out for you.
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Thank you so much!
I hope it works out for you too π
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My favorite line is
Visualizing all the pages that were read
I can picture a sleepless night and thinking like that. Thanks
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Thank you for the kind words π
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Beautiful eloquent poetry. Anand Bose from Kerala
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Thank you so much π
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I enjoyed your understated style of telling your poetic story..all sort of matter-a-factly:) until she comes in focus! Wonderful!
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Thank you so much π
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Great!!
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Thank you π
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I love your words and pictures thanks for inspiring!
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Thank you so much π
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Beautiful
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Hello just wanted to give you a quick heads up and let you know a few of the pictures aren’t loading correctly. I’m not sure why but I think its a linking issue. I’ve tried it in two different web browsers and both show the same results.
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