Your smile makes me smile,
Your laugh makes me laugh.
Your eyes are enchanting,
You make my thoughts seem daft.
Since the day I first laid eyes on you,
My feelings grew and grew.
In that first conversation, my knees clicked and clacked,
And those butterflies flipped and flapped.
And as I spill these simple rhymes,
My mind goes over time and time.
Why didn’t I ask you to dance,
During that slow song of endless romance?
I hope this doesn’t seem too creepy,
Please don’t think my thoughts have flown too freely.
Just know that what I speak is true,
And that I have fallen deeply for you.
Oh my God this is so warm and sweet and everything. I love it.
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Thank you so much!
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Wow, I’m speachless!
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Thank you 🙂
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Really heartwarming to read. Brought a smile to my face. 🙂
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Thank you so much 🙂
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these are such simple words yet it is so powrful, deep and emotional….I LOVE IT A<3 ❤ ❤ this is the point of poetry, you don't need big words, you just need to touch people's hearts
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Aww. Did she ever learn of how you feel, post-dance?
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Sadly, I never got around to asking her to dance 😓😞
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That’s a shame. At least there’s always the memory.
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Yeah. And sometimes, a happy memory is better than a sour ending.
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Amen.
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🌷😊
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This is so beautiful and real .directly from your heart
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Thank you 🙂
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All the feels….
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Reblogged this on The Perils of Improbable Potholes.
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Simple and Beautiful
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Thank you 🙂
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wow 😘😘
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Thank you 🙂
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May Bien!
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A tribute to what might have been!
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Indeed!
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Very sweet
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Howdy! This post could not be written much better! Looking through this article reminds me of my previous roommate! He constantly kept preaching about this. I most certainly will send this article to him. Fairly certain he’ll have a great read. I appreciate you for sharing!
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Wow! Thank you! I continually wanted to write on my site something like that. Can I include a fragment of your post to my blog?
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